• Phoebe Tranile

    Can’t wait to see this page redone c:

  • ScarletDoe

    No matter how many times I read this comic, I always anticipate the redrawing of the older pages, not just because the art is so gorgeous nowadays, but also because the narrative has really evolved and the english is practically flawless. The story’s so great, and I never tire of reading it. Perhaps, in time, when all old pages are updated, actual books could be printed.

    But that’s just me, I’m aware it’s not the cheapest thing to do, and you’ve all got other things to attend to. I may actually have to play the Witcher 3 game now 😉

  • BEARWOLFS <3 SO FLUFFEH

    I really like that first panel scene of them running. The faint running figures in a glowing snowy background is stunning.

  • Emareee

    The style difference from the prolouge and title page to this first page is so jarring. xD
    I like their old style, but I can’t wait till these first chapters are updated.
    //wheezes

  • Info to avoid confusion: all comments below this one were made BEFORE the page was redone.

    Don’t worry – we’re working on implementing a feature that will allow you to seethe old versions too!

    • Thanks, Vesner!

    • hedgehog1010

      Thank you! You guys are amazing!

  • Skvapter

    I’m confused, is the story complete now? or will there be another ‘Volume.’
    Asking because I’m literally uneducated in what the author’s of OFF-WHITE plan on doing after these redoes.

    • Another volume is coming as soon as we’re done polishing up this one. While we update the art and storytelling, we’re already planning and sketching out the next volume.

  • L3Wilde

    Guess you could say that all the old pages are *dramatic pause* on the road to improvement?

    Dangit I need better material.

    Looks awesome, as always, btw. 😀

  • RainingMountains

    Feels so nostalgic seeing this

    Ahh the memories 🙂

  • Shop Dog

    yaaaa off white! i was starting to miss it.
    i like how you made the planes slowly roll up into the foot hills.
    fehu and isa look annoyed wile jera looks oddly pleased, strange.

  • HaloWolf

    Will these eventually be published and available for purchase?

    • Yes, if I remember correctly

      • HaloWolf

        That’s good. 🙂 I’ve been following this comic for a long time, and would love a copy of it

    • I’m curious to know if we can have the old pages and goodies included in a buy-able bonus package. :3

  • Blue

    Beautiful… absolutely beautiful.

  • I just love the new version so much :’D

    Can’t wait for more

  • HellhoundMutt

    Holy shit, your art styles and coloring styles have improved so much…. <3 I love this so much better than the old version. Keep up the great work! I can't stop looking at it… 🙂

  • DarkShadowfax

    Aw, the redone page is so pretty!

  • ナナ/ Nana

    Old one looks strongly like Wolf’s Rain… second is obviously your own style. I love both! New one seems strongly improved but old one is so nostalgic 🙂

  • Nick Lopez

    Love it.

  • Gorabe

    Nice page *-*

  • FrickleFrackle

    So beautiful *-*

  • Leandro Evequoz

    OMG soo Beutiful :3

  • zelda74

    yeeah so beautiful !

  • While I do miss the old page, especially the first panel, this plane shot gives us a good thought of how big their trek is. Vast endless plains, with also a nice perspective of Iki being smaller and Raigho being larger, giving a greater detail of realism. (Well~, I wouldn’t expect anyone to not implement correct perspective XD)
    The wolves expressions seemed to not change much, expect for Raigho who looks more…
    I don’t know, awe mighty? (Put a champion bright glow behind him with softer highlights on him, viola pretty awesome wolf) Squeees over Raigho
    Great art improvement, it’s been a long journey Tankreon! Great to see we will have a consistent looking comic.
    Also, thanks for letting us see the old page!

  • Kikipanda

    I like how you have linked the old page so we can still view it and compare the two. 🙂

  • Shop Dog

    are you going to continue remaking the pages by redrawing over the pattern of the old pages or completely redoing all of them like here.

    • I believe on Deviantart, Akreon has a plan for the updating. Some pages are going to be redrawn, some trweeked, some reorganized, and some scenes redone completely. The scene where Fehu recognises his old pack will be completely redone because as Akreon puts it, it’s just to naive (and I argree)

  • ???

    @shop_dog:disqus yeah, they’re redoing all the old pages, and then continuing the story i think

    looks good so far omg

    • Shop Dog

      no no i ment wile there re doing the pages are they going to draw over the old pages pattern to both save time and not lose the pacing of the comic, if they cut to many panels they might lose some of the carictor development.

  • buejfkgb

    on panel 1 Gebo is on Fehu’s right side but on panel 2 he disappears! just wanted to point it out incase you want to fix it!:D

    • Artista

      I thought it was more of a matter of perspective.

  • Phoebe Tranile

    Wow! Amazing! I kinda miss the first panel from the original though ^^
    Happy it doesn’t automatically start off with talking like the original, I found that a bit awkward

  • Dusty

    I can’t wait to buy the first volume, the new pages are gonna be awesome ^-^

  • plantangel

    this is so pretty omg great work girls !! i gasped when i saw this

  • SSR

    Consistently amazed just by how QUALITY this comic is and by how much improvement I’ve seen since I started following this in /2008./ You artist ladies have such a great grasp of comic/panel design, which I didn’t think could be a hard concept to grasp until I started looking at other animal (primarily canine) comics on DA.

    Quality pages over quantity pages, any day. Can’t wait to see chapter two’s redesign.

  • old page for compare.

  • Sinny Pepin

    … wow. What a difference, beautiful.
    More pages~? Longer chapters, more scenes?! 😛

  • TevaFox

    For those who do not know, Akreon posted a sort of plan of what pages are going to be updated on deviantart. 😀
    http://akreon.deviantart.com/journal/Off-white-update-schedule-555303469

  • Surrah

    Lol the old style of the wolves were VERY fluffy XD now they’re cool

    • My wolves actually looked like the fluffy ones. ;-; XD
      Maybe I should try drawing and see if they still are…

  • TheRebelLion96

    You know, the reason I know about this comic today was because I saw that fan-made “episode 1” of this chapter on YouTube years ago. It got me hooked to the comic. I never really thought I’d see the day that that same chapter be remade. I’m just glad to be a fan. : )

  • buh-buh.. what about the last 2 panels?!

    • I believe they will move them into the next page… As I read some pages will be completely redone, it will be compensated by redone pages having removed unnecessary panels.

  • This is so beautiful… not that the previous version was any less fascinating. Loving the evolution & I’m really excited to see that new villain’s role in the grand scheme of things.

  • WARxWOLF86

    Quick thing when I clicked the next page button it took me to page 11??

    • The pages are not out of order, the page numbering is off. The next page is suppose to be page 14, not page 11.

      It’s because the new prologue is a few pages longer than the old prologue and they never renumbered the rest of the pages. So as they make the new pages, they’ll renumber them to what they should be.

      • WARxWOLF86

        OK that makes sence

  • Lynnzl

    Those backgrounds are so pretty. I mean like everyone else I appreciate the wolf style but can we just mention the background artwork in this? It’s such eye candy!

  • Wow; just look at the improvement in every aspect! Beautiful.

  • plantangel

    i feel like you guys have a special fondness for raigho? he’s always in the thumbnails eue

    • He’s so handsome, how could they not be extremely fond of him? XD

      • Artista

        Raigho got more fluffy over the years.

        • Checkers

          Company behind Skollgate must’ve released some companion shampoo to bring luscious fluff to wolf locks everywhere

          • ,,,I don’t know why, but I want to call it Rai-poo.
            What a silly name. XD
            Anyone want to name the Raigho brand of shampoo in companion for Sköllgate? :3

          • Artista

            RaigAxe…
            Shines…
            Loosens….
            Fluffs….
            Conditions…
            RaigAxe, now available the nearest Daleko.

          • Checkers

            I think Dapper would fit more

            DapperMax 2-in-1 shampoo, guaranteed to bring textures of the wilderness to your hair

            Brought to you by the creators of Skollgate and sponsored by JeraJuke, critically acclaimed music streaming platform in all regions of the great ice sheet

            Call now to get 3 packs of GeboGummies with your order

          • They could be competing brands!
            “RaigAxe is better!” “No, DapperMax!”

          • Artista

            I approve! Now, what about Fehu?

          • Checkers

            FehuFoam, the ‘oldest’, ‘wisest’ mattress brand to grace the centuries? Stay comfy while curled up all nice and warm in your blanket nests!

          • Artista

            All right, let’s go with it! Let’s see now…Sköllgate, Hating Cream, FehuFoam, RaigAxe…hmm….Albert’s Beanie-Beans?

          • Shop Dog

            where forgetting Bordeaux.

          • TheRebelLion96

            Maybe it’s Maybelline.

        • And I thought the bear dogs were fluffy.

      • plantangel

        haha truee

    • Checkers

      raigho’s always kinda seemed like the actual protagonist of the comic so him getting zoom shots in the pages that have him as the biggest focal point make sense, really

      by the lore and the pressures Iki/Skoll seem the obvious centerpiece, but they certainly don’t feel like it. with things that happen around raigho in the later pages make him seem more like the comic’s protag

  • goatfromoffwhiteツ

    Nice! 🙂

  • Oh gawd…

    Just… Wow.

  • Nyssa Willstealyoursoul

    OMG AMAZINGGGG 😀 <3

  • hedgehog1010

    I love it! Im so thankful we get to see the original still, too!

  • Checkers

    Looking at all the hills they’ve crossed over makes me think “even a molehill can be a mountain”. So much distance they have to travel.

    Is it just me or does Fehu look immensely irritable in the second panel? I know he expressed disagreement with this whole ‘field trip’ the pack is on but it wasn’t really present in the older pages. Will it be a slow boiling thing that’s more presently noticeable with these redone pages? I think that’d be pretty neat.

    • I think Fehu just looks tired. He’s old, after all. I’d be annoyed if I had to travel God-knows-how-much for a purpose I don’t even know. XD Though I like the idea of his irritation being present on earlier pages.

      • Artista

        At least Fehu isn’t the kind of old guy that bitches over everything.

      • Checkers

        He looks far more angry than tired to me, personally. If he were tired, it’d be easier to express it as more droopy or with a different expression. To me, at least.

        The face he has now makes me think of an angry great horned owl.

    • Jessi

      When coloring this page, all I could think about Fehu’s expression was that Jera farted but he knows better than to say a word.

      • Checkers

        That is the best thought to ever have while colouring a page.

      • XD
        You are hilarious, Jessimu.
        Also, I’ve missed seeing you here, it’s been half a year. ;A;

        • Jessi

          I know. ;A; I’m in my last semester of business school now. I’m hoping around the middle of December I’ll have more time to mingle!

          • Checkers

            Chocolate Hati will keep the cocoa ready around December for you. Win win!

            (does anyone even remember the old age of food puns in this comment section)

          • Ah, then focus on school! Be ze best emu in your class, and conquer the lesson! >8D

  • Artista

    There is nothing better than seeing a few people working their butts off improving and refining their craft. Cheers, Venressi!

  • MagicalChair

    ahh seeing all the work that still has to be done x_x. i can’t wait have the hard copy, are you guys going to have a kickstarter for the book or anything? I would be more an happy to pre-order it!

    • TevaFox

      OMG yes they should totally kickstarter it! Imagine the different tiers they could do. I need this in my life. Where art thou kickstarter campaign?

  • Deluge

    Those Mean glare @.@

  • Deluge

    Those Mean Glare

  • I need the second panel as a wallpaper…

  • wahots55

    Woah! This is a huge improvement!

  • cheesecake5573

    Omg 😀 so amazing and now for something I think you should all watch watch it while it’s still there in eng subs
    http://youtu.be/RCmFpfVv5jI

    • Gebo

      ahhh I grew up with this. I must have watchd it over 30 times my entire life xD

    • I loved this. X_X

    • Rookamillion

      I remember this. XD

  • SugarTits

    Raigo’s tube socks don’t match his hyper realism.

    • He wants to be unique. ;3;
      Let him wear his ultra-thin leg warmers.

      • He uses those tube socks to hold his hand warmers. ‘Cause shit gets cold there.

  • Huehue

    so they can print out the first issue book, with all the pages having the same style and quality

  • Erica

    Thank you ladies for adding a link to the original! Now we can all gape in awe at the crazy amount of improvement.

  • jessikitty

    wow the detail you put in the background is mindblowing! also I really like how crispthe lineart and shading got it’s a nice contrast to the painterly background and makes the characters pop out more!

    I have to admit though, that I like the overall look of the characters on the old page more, they looked more “wolfy” on the old page and now they look more like dogs, especially Raigho’s face reminds me of a shephard. I think it’s mainly because of the pronounced stop and boxier muzzle, also their ears got significantly bigger and thinner (though their still much smaller than the ears of the wolf in my example).
    here’s a photo of an arabian wolf (bc they have less fluff and it’s easier to see their face) http://40.media.tumblr.com/7c9a7337d2f73cc6588eea7480645c91/tumblr_mrbuvu4grx1rwcfrqo1_1280.jpg
    and of a gsd http://www.purestgermanshepherd.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/Dark-sable-german-shepherd.jpg
    to better illustrate what I mean. the wolf’s head is much flatter also his muzzle is finer and his ears are smaller in proportion to his head and fluffier even though he’s a desert animal

    I don’t mean to sound belittling or rude and don’t want to bash your artwork or anything, it’s just something I’ve noticed

  • Brittany Amori

    I LOVE the new page, but I miss how fluffy Raigho was. xD

    I honestly don’t think you guys should redo the art. I love going back and seeing how the comic progressed and to see how much the art style has improved.

    • And that’s why they’re keeping the old pages archived. :3

    • They want the comic to have a consistent art style for when they publish it. And like Two said, the old pages will still be viewable.

  • 253910

    at least theyll be redoing more of the next few pages because otherwise, you turn the page and its a completely different time of day

    • Oh gawd…

      Day! Dusk. Day! Dusk. Day! Dusk.

      That would be so funny…

  • Brezzeblade

    whos that last wolf in the back?? and why is raigho don’t have that blue eye?? other then that the back ground is sweet 😀 and the detail ROCKS

    • L3Wilde

      Wolf in the back is Iki. And Ragey doesn’t have the blue eye because this is one of the re-drawn older pages, so it takes place before all that.

      And yes, the detail does rock.

      • BReezeblade

        OH ok thanks XD LOL I fell so stupid now ok thank you for that guys means a lot 🙂

    • Checkers

      the artists are redrawing older pages so that they will all match in art quality. since this is much earlier in the story, raigho’s blue eye doesn’t come until later

      wolf hanging back in the first panel (light gray) is iki
      the darker one in the back in the second panel is isa

    • Shop Dog

      iki in panel one isa in panel two.

  • AvatarJo

    Is it just me or does Raigho look like he is smiling? (i think its just me)

    Anyway, the artwork looks stunning. Are they going to redo everything?

    • L3Wilde

      Wow he actually does look like he’s smiling a bit. Or maybe he just looks really satisfied. Must be enjoying the aWESOME SCENERY.

      And ye all, if not most, of the older pages shall be redone, and some re-written a bit, to look more awesome like this page right here.

      • Most of the pages that are being updated aren’t, for the most part, going to be rewritten. The one scene that is going to be rewritten entirely is when the encounter Othala’s pack. Tha5 scene is to naive. I’ll be glad to see out rewritten; never really liked that scene for the same reason.

        • AvatarJo

          I do agree with that point. That moment in the story just felt rushed. I can’t wait to see the upcoming redo pages.

        • Artista

          Gotta love when authors go the extra mile.

  • Celina Alex

    wow soo cool i love it

  • Pilot

    I found Isa, haha

    • TheRebelLion96

      Nice find!

    • Is that a white heart on her chest?

      • Artista

        Daddy’s little girl going rogue.

        • Pilot

          Artista D: Where’s your picture?

          • Artista

            I can’t figure out how to transfer it to the avatar icon.

  • Lynnzl

    YO guys so after like a year of concept-arting and prewriting, etc, I’m finally getting around to starting my own graphic novel. Does anyone in the Off-white community have some tips for making a GN by any chance?

    • make sure you have a set script before writing.

      make sure the script is easy for you to mark where a panel begins/ ends, whos talking and what speech goes in which thought/ speech bubble.

      make bios for every character. even if you think you know them well without needing one.

      take your time in drawing. rushing just messes things up.

    • Well~, it’s always better to write out the script before anything ever to see any plotholes or continuity issues; any problems which might not be seen from just visualizing it. (I hardly write, tho XD)
      You could make the script to match a ‘page’ (this happens in this panel, this here…), so you don’t have trouble trying to make a suitable panel. (Now that I think about it, not sure how that would work, probably only for comics?)
      Ya know what, don’t listen to me. x_x

  • Shop Dog

    secretly, every blade of grass on this page was just extended just a pixel longer.

    • Artista

      How did you know that?

    • Jessi

      You’ve ruined the secret. I can’t believe this.

      • Shop Dog

        Jessi! long time no see how goes it!

      • Jessu Sensei! My partner in crime! *hugs*

      • Rookamillion

        THE TRUTH HAS BEEN REVEALED JESSI! YOUR EVIL PLOT IS FOILED! XD

      • Shop Dog

        did you delete all my comments from the off white pages? jessi why i feel so betrayed?! i mean i know your doing weird things with the site right but why did you have to get rid f me.

  • Artista

    I wonder if it’s possible for Venressi to help SumikoOneesan a little with Tw3tbe, or FleshCreature. I’Ve been on a Wolffen derp face binge during my OW absence.

    • I honestly can’t remember which I found first: 86 or OW
      Wolfen is soo derp tho. XD

      • Artista

        The best derp! I would have a heart attack of joy if Venressi and Sumiko collaborated on a comic featuring Iki and Wolfen.

        • The mere idea of it is joyous to think about, happening or not.

  • Shop Dog

    sigh, i need more of derp Iki.

  • Brezzeblade

    well i still love this art and it gave me a idea to draw iki as how i fell today sooooooo here it is XD I hope that true artist dosnt mind that i did him.. like on one of his older pages.

  • Iki’s like “SQUIRREL!”

    • Brezzeblade

      lol like off of the moive up XD thats really good and it dose look like that.

    • Checkers

      But is he Doug Squirrel?

      Or that alpha dog with the squeaky voice from the broken collar Squirrel?

      • Either one I suppose x)

      • Nyssa Willstealyoursoul

        Doug fits Iki better.

  • TheSodaSmuggler

    How long does it take for a redo? A week plus few extra days? Lol at that rate, it will be about almost two years before volume 2 begins. So long. I remember pages being released for chapter 5 back in year 2011. It took about 4 years for the rest of chapter 5 and chapter 6 to be completed. Omfg I’ll be like 70 when all 3 volumes are complete lmao. But I still love this comic, I will forever be a fan xD

    • Shop Dog

      i would say 2 -3weeks since they have to make it flow with the pages that are finished.

      • Damn, we’re gonna be here a while. xD

        • Yaaaay 😀

          …that isn’t a good thing, is it?

          • It will be if someone brings cookies.

    • Pilot

      I hate to agree but, it’s true. I’ve never complained about the comic before and I’m not trying to now, but the progression of pages are incredibly slow. That’s part of the reason I’ve started checking the site every two months or so and have basically stopped commenting. :/
      And I especially hate being “that guy” but there’s three people working on this comic and it takes 1 1/2 weeks to push out a redone page, and well over a month for a new page.

      • Artista

        Maybe they should have thre more artists. But then again, even Blotch doesn’t take as long, nor the creators of Blacksad.

        • Pilot

          Or even Asmundr which pumps out at least 1 page a day with only one artist, nice quality too.

          • SSR

            To be honest, Asmundr is no where near the quality of Off-White. Off-White’s background are entirely hand-drawn (and the ones that aren’t are manipulated from the already-drawn panels–they’re just reusing their own art) while Asmundr’s artist relies heavily on brushes. The girls also understand comic “rules” (really, the 180-degree rule is so simple! Why has no one pointed this out to kique yet?) and how to make panels look nice. You really can’t compare OW’s update schedule vs. Asmundr’s.

            Quality > quantity. Also, artists that aren’t open to critique and hide any comments that disagree with them (as I’ve SEEN happen & has happened to me) are lame. :L

          • Checkers

            I will never understand why people always use update pace and the number of artists with Off-White as the main complaint at the update speed. # of artists =/= speed! Where in any form of logic does that make any sense? Especially since most of the people here making it know how busy the girls usually are. It just doesn’t add up.

            Asmundr’s author uses brushes for environments and really that’s fine, but there’s always signs of underpainting and his placement of speech bubbles can be incredibly poor. It would be so much better if he put more time to pages instead of just bulldozing through them like he seems to do every day or so. There’ve been times where I’ve rewritten pages in my head because the paneling and the bubbles of dialogue are outright confusing because they don’t cater to where the eye needs to flow through the art but rather to not covering the characters, and it’s downright infuriating at times.

          • Pilot

            This is going to be my first and only comment to you and SSR as I don’t want to start a comment war.
            We all have opinions and I managed to convey mine non aggressively whereas your comment is just filled with passive bitterness towards me. Yes, Off-White is 100x better at quality and story than Asmundr but that was not really my point..

          • Checkers

            Seems I still have to work on my wording then. I usually try to be as neutral as I can with responses. If there’s anything I’m bitter about it’s how people sometimes put all artists in the same basket when it comes to work process, when in reality they are not, not the people themselves. Sorry about that.

            The issue with your point was the examples you used. If you wanted to make a point about update speed, Cucumber Quest would have been a more ideal example.

          • Leoshade

            I’m just gonna…derp into this week old conversation with a big point to make xD
            Yes, the art in the comic can be lazy at times. Yes, he is writing as he goes and it is so obvious you want to slam your head over a rock sometimes. I personally dislike the comic nowadays because it focuses more on who’s-dating-who than actual plot development. Right now Asmundr is no better than a RP between a group of friends plot-wise. I’ll come back to Asmundr when the plot and premise becomes stronger and more prominent once more. Hopefully, given the recent pages, this will happen eventually.

            But, in his defense, Asmundr is just a webcomic on dA.
            As of now he does not make money off the graphic comic itself nor does he apparently plan to. He does not appear to plan to print at any point or really even advertise the comic– his fandom has done that enough. He’s just screwing around.
            OFF-WHITE does. OFF-WHITE kinda has to have decent quality xD

            Remember that when you compare a comic to OFF-WHITE. Paid vs screwing around. Just to make things fair o3o

          • Checkers

            What the author’s doing with the comic doesn’t really make grounds to change what some people think about it. Some people will like it, some people won’t. Some people will enjoy the art, while some will only see everything wrong with it.

            All you did was explain why things like his bubble placement and his art etc are annoying to some people. It can give him some slack, but it doesn’t excuse it. It’s still annoying, and it’s still there. And there will be people who hope/wish/yearn for him to improve in those areas since they disrupt their ability to properly read it.

          • SSR

            Actually, mine wasn’t filled with “passive aggressive bitterness” towards you at all, but okay. :L I was just chiming in because I’m tired of people always bringing up Asmundr in reference to Off-White’s update speed. Apples and oranges.

          • I don’t understand what’s wrong with brushes. 🙁
            To each their own style/medium.

          • not all brushes are bad. its more of how they’re used. if you over use one brush in every panel, people will notice. some consider brushes to be lazy work and when used wrongly they can be.

          • SSR

            There’s nothing inherently WRONG with using them, but in the execution. Brushes should be used in a way that it supplements the artwork, and it’s not BLATANTLY obvious the ENTIRE background is brushes. Also–if I remember correctly, a REALLY long time ago Tanathe/Vesner said what brushes she used on DA. I don’t know if it was employed in this comic/if it’s still done, but if it is, this comic would be a wonderful example of brush usage.

            I went pull some examples to show what I’m talking about with Asmundr.

            http://kique7.deviantart.com/art/Asmundr-Page-273-551875405

            http://kique7.deviantart.com/art/Asmundr-Page-269-550513830

            http://kique7.deviantart.com/art/Asmundr-Page-247-546129274

            http://kique7.deviantart.com/art/Asmundr-Page-234-543890481

            I’d like to note in the third one, too, that the color usage is pretty poor. I understand they’re in a rather green place, but that doesn’t excuse just how…uniform the palette is. There’s some much worse examples but I really don’t feel like going through all the pages.

            Anyway, I wouldn’t really consider brushes a style when they’re being used like that. The panels are really flat and boring to look at. Or maybe I’ve just been spoiled by Off-White, Guardians, Trials of the Heart, Wurr, 1942, and a few others I can’t recall.

            I’d love to offer him critique, but lol when you say you don’t want it…

          • Checkers

            He lacks technique and just needs to put more effort into developing it so that it can have improvement. Since he seems to upload pages every 1-2 days, he probably doesn’t dedicate a vast amount of the time into the panel backgrounds.

            Asmundr’s premise is really interesting and I honestly love keeping up with it, but there’s just so much artistic potential that’s being wasted LOL.

            If the guy actually took critique though, I’d sooner ask about the speech bubbles and how characters don’t really have much range of expression and sometimes talk with their mouths closed. Those are the things that squick me more than the panel backgrounds. Also the 180 degree rule.

          • Ah, ok. Thanks for elaborating. 🙂

          • Checkers

            I’ll consider Asmundr ‘quality’ when the author improves in his speech bubble placement. The way the author does it is sloppy and ridiculous.

          • Maybe if he will take longer to examine and plan, like say a few more hours, or days even, he can improve and learn. 🙂
            (also, I’m not one to know how speech bubbles should be placed. XD)

          • SRS

            He also can’t take criticism/critique. I’ll give it that Asmundr has an interesting premise, but I avoid reading the comments section now. He’d benefit so much from just SIMPLE comic “rules,” buuuut…whatever lol.

          • Checkers

            I avoid the comments because of how pitifully desperate the lot of them are for dogs to pair off and have pups.

            Like, the second Grayson’s feet were visible in a panel, people were up in arms for him to get with Niita and have puppies. They seem so bloody eager for her to get knocked up that it’s disgusting.

        • Blotch was only two girls and they manage to create plenty stuff collabed, especially a graphic novel. (I’ve yet to read Eee)
          Wait, did I more or less repeat what you said?

      • TheSodaSmuggler

        Which is very true. I used to check the site at least twice a day. Now I check at least once every few days.

      • Checkers

        You’re kinda ignoring the possibility that frequent viewers aren’t also getting busy or are just moving on because they’re getting older/finding other interests/have stuff to do that takes their own time as well.

        This comic has been in the running for years. There’s probably dozens of people that stopped following not because of a lack of interest, but because they were highschoolers starting jobs or college, or other things. It’s not always just the comic pace that makes people less frequent.

        • I haven’t been checking as often cuz of school. I’ve gotten more focused and busy with projects…
          not checking everyday. Every hour.

          This is a first for me. Whyyyyy

      • KMC

        Here’s my two cents, lol. I don’t know how the artists here are doing things, but I think what they may be doing is painting this comic one page at a time. It generally does make things go slower. I’d guess they’re scripting the revised pages as their working on older ones already scripted. So even when they have free time to “work on Off-White”, they may not necessarily be working on the pages themselves, but on the script and on sketching out future pages so they will (hopefully) come faster when they get to that page to line/paint it. I like to think things are just slow right now because they haven’t had the chance to build up a cushion of future pages. C: …Ihopelol.

      • What makes me sad is when even the artists go quiet, makes me uneasy.
        Although recent word from Jessimu calmed me up: she was busy working her last semester in business school. She hopes to mingle more with us in mid December.

    • ShiningStarStag

      Or look at it from the perspective that you’re getting to watch the creative process at work–something not all artists are willing or courageous enough to share with the world. Because doing so means facing constant criticism. I check on Off-White once every few weeks, I always have, and it’s fun for me to see a new page. Besides, the artists post updates and information and explain the gaps in time. Leave it be. It’s there work and their process and they are working on other things–who cares what other artists are doing? If I’m writing a sequel and it’s taking longer than expected to finish and get into production, should I hire another writer to finish it?

      The simple answer is hell no. I don’t expect these three exceptional artists to do that, either.

      • TheSodaSmuggler

        Like.. No shit. Lol

  • a23spyro

    I’m sorry to bother you, but your artwork has been stolen by this stie and they are selling it without your permission. There is a petition that you can sign to have the site shut down. I don’t know what else can be done at this point

    http://wallpart.com/search?keyword=off+white+comic

    https://www.change.org/p/remove-wallpart-com-stealing-people-s-work-without-persmission

    • a23spyro

      “site” sorry for the mispell

    • Shop Dog

      thank you for bringing this to attention.
      i would sing but i don’t really want to give my personal information to change.org. is there some .gov service you could report them to depending on the country the pirate website is hosted.

      • a23spyro

        I looked the site over again and it turns out it’s a scam! Don’t send them an email. It’s a phishing site! I’m sorry I didn’t realize that right away. They’re not selling anything, it’s a lure for artists to get angry and then fall for their trap. I saw my stuff on there as well, but then I looked at the Happy Customers number and it was just a jpeg fake.

        Sorry for the inconvinience, I should’ve known

        • So~, petition to have the change.org site to be taken down?

          • a23spyro

            To take Wallpart down.

          • Oh, so that one is the phishing one?

          • a23spyro

            Yes it is. As long as you don’t send them anything through email, it can’t really hurt you, but I hope the site gets taken down either way. Phishing sites are anoying

        • Rookamillion

          You should probably remove the link comrade, so no-one follows it on accident. XD

  • Artista

    Okay fellow OWies, I have paid my dues and finally watched ‘Fury’-a really badass film. XD

    • Pilot

      At first I thought you typed Furry.. lol

      • Artista

        Lol! Hey, speaking of ‘furry’ what do you think the most common problems are with furry characters.

        • Pilot

          Lol, noooot gonna go there xD

          …they like their POpcoRN.

          • Artista

            Not exactly what I meant. Not that horny fandom, but mainstream media shows.

          • Pilot

            There are Furry media shows now??
            Either that or I’m really confused lol, give me an example of what you mean

          • Artista

            For example, C.S. Lewis’ Chronicles of Narnia. Anthropmorphic animals in general and stuff. Classical and modern.

          • Pilot

            Aaah okay, they’re cool as long as they’re not pediophilic or look exactly like a human besides fur and ears

          • KaGaOri
          • Pilot

            Why did you do that, my poor eyes, my poor face making a weird face, my poor phone, my poor fingers for typing this aw ouch it burns why

          • I did not find this offensive. XD (at least the episode I watched. Took it with a grain of….sugar)
            (Before watching anything similar to it, yes it was)

          • Artista

            I saw this a very long time ago… Scarred for life. Little Bear is far more entertaing (with a cast that doesn’t talk down it’s audience, for a kids show I’ve realized). But yeah, I think Disney would have had stroke if he saw this and gwt with Milt, chuck Jones, Grim, and every animator that existed in early animation and destroy every trace of this trash and tie the makers to a tree.

          • I don’t mean to offend anyone, but I’m not a fan of Neko girls…. >.>

          • I love baked popcorns….at least, I think that’s what it is?

          • Pilot

            Lol sure, just think that xD

        • Rookamillion

          Depends….How deep are we goin’ here? XD

    • Shop Dog

      Fury was the best war film i had seen in a really long time.

      • Artista

        And they didn’t even base it off some bestseller book or true story!

        • Shop Dog

          whats this, originality? naw couldn’t be.

          • An original movie?
            What devilish sorcery are they using?!

          • Rookamillion

            SORCERY!

    • Best job I ever had.

      • Rookamillion

        Best job I ever had. *mops up the guy who had the job previously* XD

    • Rookamillion

      That movie was violent as hell. XD

  • Shop Dog

    i would like to take a poll on just how many people are still here.
    if you would be so kind just to leave a dot or something in reply to this comment.
    i’m curious so see if the community is shrinking or not, if i recall correct a few months ago someone said we had like 300 people regularly.

    • Artista

      Dot.

    • Pilot

      Dot. Gonna be more active again, not gonna let 2+ years on here go to waste! A;

    • Checkers

      Dot.

      I check often enough and sometimes have blips, but for the most part I just hardly ever talk.

    • WARxWOLF86

      Yes but

    • I was never here… Because I’m Batman!

    • Stalkkeri

      I read this comic but I don’t usually comment because I’m not good at writing in English

    • AriaJenkins

      Dot.
      Still here

    • cheesecake5573

      yeah im still here

    • cheesecake5573

      you do realize

    • Dot. Still here and loving it!!
      😀

    • Nyssa Willstealyoursoul

      *howls* I’m here ^.^ I check this site regularly to see if there’s anything new and/or exciting going on. :3

    • Dot.

    • KMC

      BOOP BOOP! 8’D I’m technically “new” in the comments, though I’ve been following this comic for a LOOONG TIME. XD

    • L3Wilde

      Ayyyyo

      I check this site every day actually ’cause I have no life. 😀

    • FrickleFrackle

      Dot :3

    • TevaFox

      Dot
      ^_^

    • TheSodaSmuggler

      Nut.


    • ^That is totally a dot.
      Å < This A has a dot on it (Well, it's an angstrom, but it looks like an A)

    • Ginny25

      dot.
      I come on to see the new pages and look at some old ones, now and again.

    • Lynnzl

      dot

    • RainingMountains

      Sup.

    • Still here.

    • .~

    • Doot Doot.

      • Shop Dog

        to late

  • plantangel

    since discussion has essentially died down, how about some of my cheesy rainbow art?

    • cheesecake5573

      cheesy? its amazing 😀

    • TevaFox

      Can we just have a minute of appreciation for this art right here?
      That is some sweet art, I’m not jealous… much

    • Now I’m thinking of Iki. XD

  • Niamh Sinclair

    Ooh! Awesome work gals! Jera looks especially cool here! Loving the redos, its gonna be so awesome when its done!!

  • Настя Шаламаева

    Mmm… Where a scar?

    • soledad

      В первой главе шрама еще нет.

    • its a redo of a older page.

  • Decided to make myself a new account. Why? because why not?

    • TevaFox

      Can you smuggle me some soda?

      What was your previous account called? If it’s anything like your new one then you have a talent for good usernames (~_^)

      • I sure can >:oooo

        It was called SymbolLovesSoda XD

        • TevaFox

          I have a feeling that soda is the main theme here XD
          And for that reason both usernames get a +1 from me
          Give me the soda (っ´▽`)っ

          • Mhm. xD -gives soda- THERES PLENTY MORE WHERE THAT CAME FROM >:O

          • TevaFox

            Yush, I mean if there wasn’t anymore soda then you need to smuggle more then 😛
            Σ(っ°Д °; )っ [_]
            The one and only SodaSmuggler, known throughout the land and feared by many brands of soda!

          • Right on point! Lmao

          • ♪♫ pop a top again ♫♪ Wait, that song’s about beer, not soda. 🙂

          • Shop Dog

            fun fact the studio where that song was recorded, was in a dry county so they had to use sprite for the can sound.

          • Oh the irony.

    • Your username, oh gosh.

      I hope your professional, I need some soda over here. XD

  • Artista

    To the American faction: did you wear blue today?

    • Shop Dog

      no. why?

    • Pilot

      Yes, but not on purpose.. why? lol

      • Artista

        They held the funeral for the Sheriff Deputy that got shot in the back of the head.

        • Pilot

          Oh that, :/

          • Artista

            Mmmhmm. Just a few hours ago they showed a ‘Black Lives Matter’ protest chanting, “What do we want? Dead cops!” We really need to get our shit together.

          • Pilot

            How about all lives matter? We really do,

          • Artista

            If only every radical got that message.

          • Shop Dog

            because to them its “my race matters.”

          • Artista

            And unfortunately some still carry generations of hatred. Some demand that whites should apologize for slavery. When I hear that lame demand, I immediately fight the urge to say, “How the hell can you demand an apology from someone who didn’t even live in that time? It is as sensless as China wanting to purge the current Japanese generations for the Rape of Nanking.” Oh, what would MLK do if he saw this…

          • Rookamillion

            0:35-1:32 Is essentially my argument everytime someone tries to guilt trip me over slavery. XD

            https://youtu.be/ie2lXGhNJpA

          • This guy is my fucking hero now. XD

          • My parents kinda have a few things to say about the U.S (losing land, breaking a promise, such and such…not quite happy with their past history together), but in no way do they wish any harm against the U.S. D:

          • Shop Dog
          • Rookamillion

            I love that damn show. Chris Chapel is the best person ever. XD

          • Shop Dog

            i like him a bit better than john Oliver. john just gets to silly with his videos sometimes.

          • Artista

            It wouldn’t surprise me. I’d expect it, whether it happens or not, or if they say they don’t. I feel bad for Prime Minister Abe. His popularity with other Asian countries that were formerly invaded by the Imperialists. It’s understandable, but he does have a right to honor fallen soldiers at a memorial shrine. I’m not worried ablout the Japanese becoming Imperialist again, and I’m glad Abe increased military budgets and spending because at this stage of tension from N. Korea and China and Russia, it would be a strategic move in case bombs go off.

            And the US has broken many promises, and we’ll have to answer for it one day. Personally, I think America is gonna get a good spanking ftom God’s iron rod. Ideally, I hope all these incidents bring us back to our roots.

          • Rookamillion

            A strong Japan has always been in the interest of the U.S…..We never wanted them to go all pacifistic.We wanted their help in fortifying against the Soviets and China. Still do technically…..Minus the Soviet Union. XD

          • 日本バンザイー!☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
            北海道はどこ?

          • Rookamillion

            XD

          • Rookamillion

            Yeah. The Chinese really hate the Japanese…… With the burning passion of a thousand suns. XD

          • Ouch! I don’t plan on getting a sunburn! D:
            By the way, didn’t Mao actually thank the Japanese for invading them? O.o (after the Prime Minister apologized)
            (Communists grew in power/army while Nationalists were fighting and losing a lot of men)

          • Rookamillion

            Don’t worry! With SUNHERDER ®

            brand Sunblock from Skollgate, you’ll be protected from all burning rays of hatred in 4500 proof style! XD

            But yeah, they needed someone to be the enemy, to distract the Chinese people from the fact that the Chinese government killed way more of it’s own citizens than any foreign army. XD

          • I honestly don’t understand why we all can’t move on, work together, and start real change.

          • Shop Dog

            because some selfish people in the politics are profiting from all this race baiting, like clinton and boxer.

          • Artista

            I’m right with you on that.

          • Shop Dog

            and there whole argument about being treated like jim crow law, people get abused more that they should. but the media plays it like all police go out killing, when in reality these extreme cases of police abuse are completely separate and often months apart. Are there some bad cops around sure, should they be investigated defiantly but don’t play it up to be worse than it is, and don’t go door to door beating up cops that have nothing to do with it.

          • Some folks think sayin “All Lives Matter” misses the point, but I disagree. Don’t other lives matter? Should we forget about them just because they aren’t Spotlighted? And hate on the others, especially cops, because of a few? Why punish the good folk?
            There are plenty of good people, but those few who do not see that always keep the bad ones overshadowing the rest, even complimenting/condoning killings (yes I’ve read bastardly comments like that) (I’m not saying they all condone it, in fact very few do)
            It isn’t one person’s fault for another’s action just cause they are similar in some way.
            Yet people are too overwhelmed with emotions/hatred to want to see that.

          • Pilot

            You’ve hit it spot on sadly

          • Checkers

            The reason the bad is always brought up is because it is the part that needs to be fixed. Good parts do not need fixing or publicity. A good cop isn’t doing anything special, because that is basically them doing their job. Bad ones get the attention because they’re crossing lines and tend to get slaps on the wrist for it instead of proper punishment, and that’s not OK. “No news is good news”.

            All Lives Matter distract from the shitty parts of life (ones that have tendency to orbit around specific races) that people are crying to be fixed.

            It’s making light of circumstances by flattening everything to the same level of shitty, which is not right because some people get far more shit dealt to them than others, and much more often as well, depending. It’s not helping the cause that more specific tags are vouching behind.

          • Hmm, you make it enlightening!
            I just don’t want people to think all there is IS shitty stuff. Plus killing other guys isn’t really….better.
            (People have this tendency to think only what they see is all there is)
            But ya, I agree don’t gloss over bad things, they need fixin!

          • Someone who wishes the death of someone ain’t any better. -.-
            Honestly, those fools are making a bad image.

          • Artista

            Radicals can’t be helped unless you corrale them into a prison.

          • Well, better for us and them, but then I’d be a complete hypocrite as I hate cages! xp
            (Or rather, especially being held against will.)

          • They don’t think ANY lives matter, obviously. Nobody deserves to be killed. And this happened not three weeks later than the reporter shooting on a live broadcast. Honestly, humanity is so depraved it hurts.

        • Shop Dog

          oh 🙁

    • Rookamillion

      Lol. I did as a matter of fact. XD

  • Ghost

    ITS AMAZING EXCELLENT WORK

  • Rookamillion

    I finally showed up to the party. XD

  • http://fav.me/d98gn2n

    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO an awesome coincidence!

  • Rookamillion

    Also, some good music for all you music fans whose taste is a little out there. XD Enjoy while you wait:

    https://youtu.be/5LFB3I3ASsQ

    • WARxWOLF86

      If your looking to listen to random songs timed to some awsome wolf art sk productions does a really great job heres one of them
      http://youtu.be/osW5rNfyBrE

  • Deluge

    Heyah!! It’s been 2 month since last time i visit this Comic, but hey stay strong guys and we hope this comic would Boom the World XD

  • Shop Dog

    theres a fan census down below for those who cant see.v

  • Dem clouds.

  • WARxWOLF86

    Ok now i know this is so far off topic that its not funny but it came accross me today when i asked my friend to bring my truck up from the lower pasture but he couldnt because its a manual but thats when i realized almost no one can drive a manual so i just wanted to ask can anyone here drive a vehicle that has a manual transmission or even ask your parents if they can

    • Shop Dog

      i havent driven cars before but i’ve driven a manual tractors.

      • WARxWOLF86

        Counts as long as you can find them without grinding them

    • TevaFox

      Almost everyone in my family drives manually -my dad recently bought an automatic so he frequently switches from manual to automatic nowadays 🙂
      I thought it was the other way around, more manual than automatic. Then again I guess it depends on such country you’re in ¯_(ツ)_/¯

      • WARxWOLF86

        Maybe i know i drive a manual but alot of people around me dont know how to and i find it sad because learning to drive a manual was the best thing i ever did but up where im at manual cars are rare

        • TevaFox

          So far from what I’ve learnt from my driving lessons, I love driving manually and feel more in control than automatic. I think both manual and automatic are commonly used in the UK but I don’t think that’s surprising at all.

    • cheesecake5573

      my parents drive manual cars which means they can automatically drive automatic cars

    • Here in Germany we learn how to drive manual in license school because then we are not restricted to automatic cars only. Plus, automatic cars are not that far spread in Germany yet, so that’s that. I myself own a manual car and currently learn how to drive it 😀

    • Flopsydabunny

      of course! lmao but none of my friends can drive my car, it’s kinda funny

      • WARxWOLF86

        Im still bugging my friend because he thinks hes all that but could not drive my old farm truck up to the house so i had to lol

    • Time to learn how to drive stick! XD

  • One of my favourite pages of this chapter! Jera looks fierce as always.

  • Anonymous

    Even here, Fehu already looks fed up and rebellious.

    • lucia sanchez

      i like your profile foto