I don’t really like the addition of ”you idiot” on the first panel. Its more powerful without it and it makes it sound more childish
Sonic
They are talking with a decision may affact their survival. The turn “*****” is better than “S** ** **” (there is no B**** in wolf) or “F*** ***” (Too old to F***). I*** is stronger than stupid, and will more likely been used when a lower rank soilder is argue with a higher rank officer. (Caution Raigho really can kill him, just like in military fashion)
Sevlesruoymlac
Stupid South Park ruined the second panel for me. Whenever I read “Respect my authority,” I read it like Cartman.
Albino
OMG lol me to now, look what you did to me!
Sky
That’s new, Fehu.
Doglover141
Lower your tail, Fehu
ChillaxinWolf
Cool art as always.
WolfMistress
I sense tension in the next panel… If this keeps up, I see Raigho losing dominance over the pack. I wonder what would happen then…? I can’t wait to see where this leads!
Galaxy
Wonder what the next page will be….maybe a fight
Kaguetora
TOTALY IN LOVE WITH THIS COMICCCCC , i hope they won’t ge in a fight!!! this is EPIC
WeaponMeister01
UH OH! I hope they won’t get in a fight……Actually, that would just make it more epic…GAH I’m torn!!
WeaponMeister01
I also have a question, how long did it take you to draw wolves like this? I’m just blown away at how realistic they look.
ChillaxinWolf
When is Gebo going to come back?
KC
The other wolves get the heck out of theeeeeere…
Because they know something’s goin’ dowwwwwn~
Yes, I have that song stuck in my head, in case you haven’t noticed :p
Wolf Sting
Tobuscus is hilarious!!
“Too bad, cause she had a nice pair of… Bioshock Infinete…s.”
“The birds get the hell out of there, cause they know somethings going down. Is he gonna die? No it’s just a medium shot. Pan- zoom- slo mo means he’s the target!… Just kill them with your awesome!…” XD
Bannana Muffin
looks like there is trouble brewing.. i scence a wolf fight scene on its way.. still great art & beautiful attention to detail! <3
http://off-white.eu off-the-chartsgood
me sences a sassy cat fight comen on! ;O
http://deviantart.com TheGoldWolf
WHY I CAN’T DRAW LIKE YOU???????????????????????????????????????
ChillaxinWolf
You have to practice every day that’s what I’m doing.
http://afterthestormx.proboards.com Zeph
Uh-oh.
Fehu is pushing it!
Ria
I…I…I NEED MORE!!!!!!!
wolffie1111
OMG when is teh next page coming out >w<
TheBoss
New pages generally come out on Saturdays unless something comes up and the cannot post the page right away.
Please keep in mind that they are in college and have lives outside of the internet.
Wolfie (I’ve returned! :D)
I knew it’d happen eventually. I wonder how the comic would be if Raigho was overthrown? Would Jera stay with him, or go with Fehu? What about the kids- wait… All Fehu would have to do is offer Iki some candy and the kid would happily follow him anywhere. XD Even into a white van.
Pacmanite
Is it just me, or does the art look very different in this page? While I’d been enjoying watching the pinkish colours of the evening fade softly away, the sudden dark blue on this page seems a bit jarring. Especially when Fehu and Raigho’s colouring and shading is so harsh in the first panel. And the wolves’ poses and facial expressions look strangely stiff up there.
I like the way you painted Fehu’s face in the third panel, though. There seems to be more subtlety and sensitivity in his old face and the colours are more unified in that panel.
Sorry if I sounded a bit too harsh. I only really read this comic to stare at the art. And I know you go through a lot of hard work to make this comic. I just… something felt a bit off? Like I accidentally clicked a comic from a much earlier page?
Jödur
Maybe the colors aren’t pink anymore, because the sun already set?
Minuke74
Actually a view of the scene changed. Behind Raigho and Gebo are mountains. They give their fur cold colours. If you watch closely, the colours of thei faces, which are in front of the light, are the same as on the last page. Only the new view changed their colours of their fur.
Sorry for not the best English
ME
yeah, now I see what you mean, the drawings do look harsher in this page. I’m rooting for fehu!
TinynessRules
Yeah, its the light but I also think its because of the tension going on right now, giving it a better look and such.
flintfang
Ooh, Next page ‘s gonna be ugly. You don’t be threatening A pack leader like that.
White Wolf
right.
PS: How you uploaded a immage?
Buffy
You have to sign up for it, it’s free. :3 I asked a couple pages back and they link to it is there.
Tara
Both of them have really changed their personalities suddenly.
Brandon
nice and oh my god
Gehn
Well, you’ve just never seen Fehu get angry.
Safaia
It is true that Raigho isn’t entertaining the idea of telling at least Fehu what is going on (because I am pretty sure Jera knows) but then the story wouldn’t have as much drama if you think about it. Although Fehu should learn to not question your alpha male because even if he is older and has more experience doesn’t mean that Raigho can’t kick his ass.
Dember
Honestly, I’m not so sure. The alpha isn’t necessarily always the strongest, nor even the best fighter. Dominance levels and good, reliable leadership depends on a lot more than strength alone.
I have two wolfdog hybrids in real life, and both are completely submissive to my elderly little cattledog mix, although I’m sure either of them could demolish her if they were to ever actually get into a fight. So..I don’t know.
I’m sort of hoping Raigho and Fehu do indeed get into a quarrel, though. It’d be interesting, to say the least. >3>;
Safaia
They probably will, but if you think about it in the animal world (excluding the fact that these are human-esk wolves) it is all about strength since strength = dominance. However, since these are human-ish wolves then yes leadership would be something to consider.
Mel
Normally the Beta Wolf (second in rank) is the biggest and strongest. His/Her job is to protect the Alpha and the Pack. The Alpha is the most aggressive and has the most dominance. They will test the Alpha from time to time and usually get put back into place but if he shows any sign of weakness he is forced out (sometimes killed) and the other wolf takes over as leader. I’ve seen a low ranking female wolf take down an Alpha female because the Alpha kept tormenting her. She did not take her place however, it’s up to the Alpha male to choose a new mate.
Safaia
I did not know that…hmm but still agression can intimidate someone enough to make them back down, you know the “bully” tactic. Although in this case Fehu is challenging his leadership (kind of like a rouge lion challenging a Pride Lord) so it isn’t then same as him showing weakness
Paragon
This story is just getting better and better.
Airisu
Mutiny in the pack! though Raigho should just tell everyone the truth so they know what they are unknowingly risking their lives for.
TheBoss
For the record, Raigho probably isn’t taking into consideration that he could just tell the truth, remember that Raigho has a lot of shit on his mind already.
Glory
NOOO!!!! Don’t fight there!! Your standing on the edge of an icy cliff!!
ChikaWolf
Oh my! I totally forgot about that! Hope they don’t fight! >.<
White Wolf
Too O.O
Ria
Remember what happened to Iki! And he was just looking at birds!
Lex
Raigho, Fehu is way older and probably way more experienced at fighting than you. I’m not sure what you mean by him forcing you to hurt him, because I’m pretty sure he’d be able to hurt you back. O.o
Anyway, I’m glad someone here isn’t taking Raigho’s crap! Yay plot!
Safaia
Nah because Raigho is younger and stronger than him, I think he’ll win.
Dember
Five years old isn’t exactly elderly, or even past the prime, really. I’m really interested to see who would win, or at least who will back down first.
Safaia
Fehu is only 2 years older than Raigho (Fehu = 7 and Raigho = 5)
Kaya
With wolves two years make a very big difference…
Gehn
Ouch, I didn’t think Fehu would go that far.
Nikki
Oh snap- no tail lowering…
Surely this would be a good time for Gebo or Kaya (if she left to follow them after discovering the death of the pack that is?) or Gebo AND Kaya to turn up? Especially since Gebo was hurt… that would probably take Fehu’s attention for a while- then bring it back when they go to the pass thats so dangerous with an ingured Gebo…
Come on Gebo we need you!
Safaia
What is Gebo going to do? He is too submissive to do anything!
Sunbright
He could walk in (as said before in Nikki’s comment).
Safaia
What I mean is that Gebo running in saying “Stop! Stop!” Isn’t going to do anything since these two alphas (considering the fact that Fehu could be one) already at their peak of anger are most likly going to go at it. What COULD happen is while they are fighting and Gebo DOES show up, Fehu will notice and get distracted and Raigho takes him down.
ME
I’m pretty sure that if an injured Gebo was to enter the scene both alphas would forget their little squabble to help him
Anna
If I could like your comment, I would :)
Overcast
Yes! I’d love to see a scrap here.
Fullmoonstar
Really great conflict here. I really like that the characters have quarrels from time to time in Off White. I like that, because they become much more realistic through this. They also seem not that flat, like characters from other stories and comics. They have all got an individual personality, which tend to clash every now and then. I hoped that Fehu wouldn’t just go but defend his opinion, when I read the last page. And you have not disappointed me^^. This is a very interesting part of the conversation, cause I am damn curious right now about what will happen next. I hope that they will be able to handle this without splitting the pack once more….because I think that Jera, Iki and Isa would follow Raigho…
The Art is just as brilliant as usual. I again love the lighting and the expressions of both characters. Damn interesting by all means…I can’t wait to read the next page to see what will happen XD
http://flowerlarkstudios.com/ Flowerlark
Lovin’ the art it that last panel. Although they all look great.
Fenriswolf
Are they going to fight? I can’t wait for the next page!
Steph
:) Yay for so many quick updates!
Amazing as always
http://www.thebeastlegion.com Jazyl H
I have been reading this Amazing series for 2 months now & I have to congratulate you for your AMAZING efforts – both story & art. Each page has it’s own uniqueness & the way you capture expressions on the wolves is priceless. I hope to see the comic top the webcomic list real soon & I’m sure that’ll happen. Until then keep up the fantastic work!
Xaiel
I’m starting to dislike Raigho he’s being quite the bully. If he didn’t have to hide everything then noone would distrust him.
Falcon
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! XD
Just when I thought it was ending…the last page looked like Fehu was backing off.
But I had a feeling this would happen, sooner or later.
Falcon
But then again, I don’t want to see Fehu kicked out of the pack…
Deathz
I hope they dont fight eachother. o-o I feeling Jera might join to back Raigho up since they are mates. o.o
But who knows maybe Gebo comes in and distracts them from the fight…
possible for a moment though. -.-
Double U
Ooh, the tension is building… Fehu’s made some really good points so far. Raigho just seems overly stubborn, unwilling to share anything with his pack and apparently not caring what everyone else thinks after seeing him in the past few pages.
jacruz666
I bet that the white wolf will come back saying the old pack was killed and will prevent a fight ;)
http://off-white.eu/comic/page-156 kaylynn
time for fehu to ef shit uuuuup :D
Buffy
Now Jera bites Iki and he gets all lit-up with powers. And everyone listens to Raigho like he is god. The End. :D
Misaki
Raigho really should watch what he says to an elderly wolven such as Fehu…
If they do fight, I think Raigho would win, but sooner or later, he needs to tell Fehu SOMETHING, he cant hide everything from his pack forever… Secrets like this lead to problems in alpha authority..
Wonder what Jera would think if Fehu lead them back, seeing she is the alpha female :o
Kaya
I wish that Raigho really don’t hurt him…
Fehu became my favorite character.
Lisa
cos dziwnie u was z tym światłem raz jasno raz ciemno. Ale i tak pięknie :)
mysteriouswhitewolf
I hope they dont fight. Fehu is old and wouldnt stand much of a chance against Raigho who is strong and in his prime. If they do fight i atleast hope Raigho goes easy on him.
Fehu could do damage sure, but its an unlikely win.
Virencia
Aww snap he didn’t put his tail down on the last panel……. I hope they have a fight!!